Wednesday, 23 October 2013
Character interview - Albert
Character INTERVIEW
ALBERT SMITH,
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When were you happiest?
When I am working. I hate to say it.
What is your earliest memory?
In Manhattan, aged four, on the street with my hands in the snow.
Property aside, what's the most expensive thing you've bought?
A vacation for family and friends.
What is your most treasured possession?
A little trinket that was given to me by a friend a long time ago.
What makes you unhappy?
Somebody saying one thing and doing another.
What is your favourite smell?
In New York City, the smell of streets – it reminds me of my childhood.
To whom would you most like to say sorry and why?
Maybe to myself for some of the stupid shit I did when I was younger.
What is the worst job you've done?
"Punking" steel rods on a building site. It's good pay, but brutal.
What has been your biggest disappointment?
I wanted to meet Quentin Tarantino for Django Unchained but he had Jamie Foxx in mind – that one hurt.
If you could edit your past, what would you change?
I worked so much when my first son was born that I missed
Script
SCRIPT
INT.
PAWN SHOP, DAY
JAMIE,
a rich well-dressed young male, aged 34, takes a casual trip to his local pawn
shop. JAMIE is on a mission to collect abnormal antiques to add to his
collection. Whilst browsing around the premises JAMIE collides with an
estranged scraggy rough living homeless guy.
JAMIE
Sorry
mate, are you alright?
ALBERT doesn't respond and swiftly disappears out of the shop, not realising he has
dropped his dog tags, in which he was originally going to trade. Jamie realises
that Albert has left behind his dog tags and picks them up, expecting to return
them but to his surprise Albert has already left the shop and is out of sight.
Whilst scanning the tags for any significant detail Jamie comes across an
engraving reading
‘With all my love,Dad.’ (16/11/1985)
A
moment of pause is taken by Jamie, as a tear draws from his eye. He reaches for
his neck and tugs at his dog tags. A thought bubbles appears reading…
2+2=……
Rich
Guy + Poor Guy=…..
Tag+
Tag = BROTHERS??!!!!
Putting
the two together Jamie recognises that this was the other half of his set of
dog tags, and as they were given to him and his brother when their father
passed away, he realises that the homeless guy, Albert, was his brother.
Astounded by his findings Jamie rushes out the shop to find Albert.
EXT.
ROAD, NIGHT
As
time fly by
evening occurs and there is still no sighting of Albert. Jamie finds himself
parked on a street bench collecting his thoughts and setting himself the task
of finding Albert as soon as possible, yet still going about his day to day
life. As this takes places another thought bubble is shown reading..
Hmmm…..
The
screen fades out via the use of special effects.
A
montage sequence is then shown, portraying JAMIE’S journey to find Albert. The
montage consists of the park, the market area and an ordinary road.
EXT.
PARK, DAY
The
park is the primary stage of the montage. JAMIE is strolling through the park
on his way to work, continuously on the lookout for the sighting of his long
lost brother. Convinced he is not around JAMIE exists the park, whilst a
glimpse of ALBERT is shown in the same location sitting on a bench dazing at
the sky moments after.
ANIMATION
IS USED TO SHOW THE JOURNEY FROM THE PARK TO THE MARKET.
EXT.
BARKING MARKET, DAY
Barking
market is the second stage of the montage. Running for the bus JAMIE is found looming through the market. As he is running ALBERT is briefly shown sitting outside
of a shop, covered in dirt holding a worn out blanket. With his mind focused on
catching the bus JAMIE is unaware that he ran past ALBERT, missing the chance
to reunite with his brother.
THE
USE OF SPECIAL EFFECTS SUCH AS FADES AND THE TITLING OF 24HRS LATER CREATE THE
CUT FROM THE MARKET TO THE ROAD.
EXT.
ROAD, AFTERNOON
The
final phase of the montage shows Jamie walking home. He returns to the bench in
which he is initially found sitting on in one of the prior scenes. Albert takes
a seat again to recalculate his thoughts, thinking to give up on his quest for
ALBERT, when JAMIE gets an unexpected viewing of Albert .is found rummaging
through a bin in the mists. As JAMIE swiftly leaves the bench ALBERT is about to
cross the road.
JAMIE
Excuse
me? Homeless Guy!
ALBERT!
Jamie
shouts but fails to be heard. Jamie draws nearer to Albert and as he is about
to cross he outreaches his arm tapping Albert on the shoulder. Albert stops and
turns to face Jamie, unaware of an oncoming car and his positioning in the
road.
CAR
NOISES ARE HEARD IN THE BACKGROUND
As
the car swiftly approaches Jamie is forced to throw himself at Albert, causing
the two of them to land heavily on the curb, nonetheless saving Albert’s life.
During their landing the dog tags fall out alighting side by side, finally
revealing to Albert, what he considered to be a local rich guy, is actually his
brother.
Elaborated Treatment
Elaborated
Treatment
Jamie
and Albert are two strangers who happen to collide in their local pawn shop.
However as
simplistic
as it seems a much deeper story lays in the mists of these two individuals and
the mysterious
connection
they share. Jamie, 34, is a rich man, interested in unusual antiques, hence the
reason him
being
in a pawn shop?! Albert on the other hand is not so fortunate. Thirty-nine,
hungry and homeless
he
finds himself in the pawn shop having to sell his most pride possession, his dog
tags. As mentioned
before,
during their visits to the pawn shop, the two of them experience an accidental
encounter,
resulting
in Albert dropping his dog tags. However rather than excusing himself and
picking them up, the
estranged
Albert anxiously rushes out the door. Jamie realises that Albert has left
behind his dog tags
and
goes to return them, but to his surprise Albert has already left the shop and
is out of sight. Whilst
scanning
the tags for any significant detail Jamie comes across an engraving reading
‘With all my love,
Dad.
(16/11/1985). A moment of pause is taken by Jamie, as a tear draws from his
eye. He reaches for
his
neck and tugs at his dog tags. Putting the two together Jamie recognises that this
was the other half
of
his set of dog tags, and as they were given to him and his brother when their
father passed away, he
realises
that the homeless guy, Albert, was his brother. Astounded by his findings Jamie
rushes out the
shop
to find Albert. As evening occurs there is still no sighting of Albert, Jamie
sets himself the task of
finding
Albert as soon as possible, yet still going about his day to day life.
Throughout the course of the
week
Jamie finds himself in the same locations as Albert, still one way or another
he manages to miss
him.
As Jamie begins to lose all hope, his journey on his way home leads to an
unexpected sighting of
Albert
about to cross the road. Jamie shouts but fails to be heard. Jamie draws nearer
to Albert and as
he
is about to cross he outreaches his arm tapping Albert on the shoulder. Albert
stops and turns to face
Jamie,
unaware of an oncoming car and his positioning in the road. As the car swiftly
approaches Jamie
is
forced to throw himself at Albert, causing the two of them to land heavily on
the curb, nonetheless
saving
Albert’s life. During their landing the dog tags fall out alighting side by
side, finally revealing to
Albert,
what he considered to be a local rich guy, is actually his brother.
Tuesday, 22 October 2013
Final Idea - Treatment
As a group we all decided to use the "The Journey" as our final idea treatment to use in our short film.

The reason I chose "The Journey" is because I feel that the themes involved are important and unique. The main themes in this idea is separation, lost siblings, journey, togetherness and perseverance. I also find these themes inspiring and I potentially feel I could make a good impact short film out of this story.


The reason I chose "The Journey" is because I feel that the themes involved are important and unique. The main themes in this idea is separation, lost siblings, journey, togetherness and perseverance. I also find these themes inspiring and I potentially feel I could make a good impact short film out of this story.
Draft 4 -Treatment
Sharing
The fourth idea for my final treatment is called "Sharing"
"Sharing" is about a wealthy boy (aged 12) who meets a poor boy (aged 11), who both encounter a strong friendship despite the different background they are both from. Their friendship is expressed through the enjoyment of their company and sharing of items such as clothes,food and toys which they both love. The only conflict separating their friendship is the wealthy boys's parents who do not agree with the mixing of an inferior and "lesser" family.
This idea inspired me through watching a similar film called "The Boy In The Striped Pyjamas" which is based in Germany set in World War 2 about a forbidden friendship between a wealthy German boy and a Jewish boy on the other side of the camp fence. But through the risky communications of both boys starling and unexpected consequences follow.
The fourth idea for my final treatment is called "Sharing""Sharing" is about a wealthy boy (aged 12) who meets a poor boy (aged 11), who both encounter a strong friendship despite the different background they are both from. Their friendship is expressed through the enjoyment of their company and sharing of items such as clothes,food and toys which they both love. The only conflict separating their friendship is the wealthy boys's parents who do not agree with the mixing of an inferior and "lesser" family.
This idea inspired me through watching a similar film called "The Boy In The Striped Pyjamas" which is based in Germany set in World War 2 about a forbidden friendship between a wealthy German boy and a Jewish boy on the other side of the camp fence. But through the risky communications of both boys starling and unexpected consequences follow.
Draft 3 - Treatment
The Charity

My third draft for my final story idea is called "Charity"
This idea is about a man who is suspicious that the money he is actually sending to charities that help his cause are in fact a scam. Through this paranoia of the man. he decides to investigate this situation.
This idea inspired me through the hearing of charity appeals and moving stories of innocent children being sick and homeless.

My third draft for my final story idea is called "Charity"
This idea is about a man who is suspicious that the money he is actually sending to charities that help his cause are in fact a scam. Through this paranoia of the man. he decides to investigate this situation.
This idea inspired me through the hearing of charity appeals and moving stories of innocent children being sick and homeless.
Draft 2 - Treatment
Draft 1 - Treatment
The dream
As a group we had 4 possible ideas that we wanted to be our final treatment and story for our film.
Our first idea was called "THE DREAM" which is about a young child's mother who constantly tells her one and only son to recycle. But because he is so arrogant and selfish he decides not to obey his mother and to keep on littering. Through his consequences one night he has a dream about all the potential risks of littering and not recycling, which makes him see sense and finally does the right thing.
The idea inspired me from local news stories such as Newsround and how severe environmental issues were in this country e.g. recycling, global warming, Animal habitation.
As a group we had 4 possible ideas that we wanted to be our final treatment and story for our film.
Our first idea was called "THE DREAM" which is about a young child's mother who constantly tells her one and only son to recycle. But because he is so arrogant and selfish he decides not to obey his mother and to keep on littering. Through his consequences one night he has a dream about all the potential risks of littering and not recycling, which makes him see sense and finally does the right thing.
The idea inspired me from local news stories such as Newsround and how severe environmental issues were in this country e.g. recycling, global warming, Animal habitation.
Articles/Stories - Research on Journey's
Thousands race in Great Scottish Run through Glasgow

One of the world's top athletes joined thousands of people taking part in the Great Scottish Run.
About 23,000 club, fun and charity runners took part in the half-marathon and 10k events in Glasgow.
Ethiopian former Olympic and World champion Haile Gebrselassie won the half marathon event with a new course record of 61 minutes and nine seconds.
A number of roads were closed for the races, which started at George Square and finished at Glasgow Green.
Three Scots finished in the first four of the women's half marathon, with Leeds-based Susan Partridge beating Freya Ross to the line. Kenya's Pauline Wanjiku third and Steph Twell fourth.
Following his victory, Gebrselassie said: "After losing out in the last mile at the Bupa Great North Run I had to get clear today and decided to make my move when I did and it worked so well, I'm happy with this win."
Super Saturday
Scottish Finance Minister John Swinney was among those due to run the half marathon course.
World champion swimmer Keri-Anne Payne, Celtic manager Neil Lennon and Emmerdale stars Chris Chittell and Eden Taylor Draper were due to run in the 10k.

The reason i have chose this type of research for my story is because it is related to themes of my story. i have interpreted the meaning of journey in a different style. i have not used the ordinary interpretation of a person going through an emotional journey which leads him to be a better person, but instead i have researched about a marathon run that takes place in Scotland, Glasgow which is supposed to be a fun charity run that not just marathon runners have participated but also celebrities and amateur runners which shows a remarkable journey between the start and finish line.
The reason i have chose this type of research for my story is because it is related to themes of my story. i have interpreted the meaning of journey in a different style. i have not used the ordinary interpretation of a person going through an emotional journey which leads him to be a better person, but instead i have researched about a marathon run that takes place in Scotland, Glasgow which is supposed to be a fun charity run that not just marathon runners have participated but also celebrities and amateur runners which shows a remarkable journey between the start and finish line.
Articles/Stories - Research on List Siblings
Coastguards today called off a £10,000 search for two boys who were thought to have gone missing from a popular tourist beach.
A three-hour search for the youngsters, aged six and eight, who were reported missing after they were last seen on the seafront at Ryde on the Isle of Wight this lunchtime, was later stood down.
The Marine and Coastguard Agency said on Twitter at 4.25pm: ‘We've searched the sea and shore and we now don't think there are two kids in danger.’
Coastguard rescue team, helicopter and lifeboat were all involved in the search. Hampshire Constabulary said it was triggered when the force was alerted at 1.21pm by Solent Coastguard.
The boys were apparently last seen near Appley Tower. The six-year-old boy was said to have dark brown hair, pale skin, dark brown eyes and the eight-year-old had a mole on his left shoulder.
'We've searched the sea and shore and we now don't think there are two kids in danger'
Marine and Coastguard Agency
'We've searched the sea and shore and we now don't think there are two kids in danger'
Marine and Coastguard Agency
This research is important to our group because the theme is linked to our story. it is also important because it gives our story a sense of direction and how to conduct our story into a real life situation. i have researched this specific topic about a "missing boy" because it is related to our main theme about lost siblings.
A three-hour search for the youngsters, aged six and eight, who were reported missing after they were last seen on the seafront at Ryde on the Isle of Wight this lunchtime, was later stood down.
The Marine and Coastguard Agency said on Twitter at 4.25pm: ‘We've searched the sea and shore and we now don't think there are two kids in danger.’
Coastguard rescue team, helicopter and lifeboat were all involved in the search. Hampshire Constabulary said it was triggered when the force was alerted at 1.21pm by Solent Coastguard.
The boys were apparently last seen near Appley Tower. The six-year-old boy was said to have dark brown hair, pale skin, dark brown eyes and the eight-year-old had a mole on his left shoulder.
'When we were told about the missing children it was awful. You always assume the worst and being a mother, I felt sick'
Sarah Thornton, beachgoer
‘Police deployed officers and staff to check nearby public places, tourist attractions and hotels. Details of the boys were circulated to public transport operators and Solent ferry Sarah Thornton, beachgoer
'We've searched the sea and shore and we now don't think there are two kids in danger'
Marine and Coastguard Agency
'We've searched the sea and shore and we now don't think there are two kids in danger'
Marine and Coastguard Agency
This research is important to our group because the theme is linked to our story. it is also important because it gives our story a sense of direction and how to conduct our story into a real life situation. i have researched this specific topic about a "missing boy" because it is related to our main theme about lost siblings.
Character Interview - Jamie
Q&A – Jamie Smith
Jamie Smith, 34, was born in Bristol but moved to London after a successful job promotion. Jamie the eldest of the two siblings, was given two dog tags by his father who was dying of a serious illness in which one was for Jamie and other for his younger brother albert. On the tag tags with their full names and dates of birth, unfortunately as to having no outside family to take them in and their mother not being present, Jamie and his younger brother were sent to a care homes fortunately Jamie was adopted by a rich couple who couldn’t have kids and given a loving and caring home, whilst albert was left behind due to the couple only wanting one child, leaving them separated.
When I became successful in my career
What is your earliest memory?
When my dying father gave me and my younger brother a dog tag in his memory
Which living person do you most admire and why?
Alan sugar as he’s a professional business man I look up to and admire
What is the trait you most deplore in yourself?
I’m too competitive in the sense it sometimes overtakes me
What was your most embarrassing moment?
When I was in school, I came out the boys toilets with a toilet paper stuck to my shoe , everyone was laughing
Property aside, what's the most expensive thing you've bought?
I invested in a property for a quarter of a million
What is your most treasured possession?
My dog collar
What would your super power be?
I would say invisibility as because as a child my favorite cartoon show character was ‘Mr. Invisible’ and even till this day I would still want to be him
What makes you unhappy?
When things don’t go my way, fore.g. when people cancel important meetings
What is your most unappealing habit?
I have a bad habit of biting my nails
What is your favorite smell?
Musk reminds me of my mother as a child
What is your favorite word?
‘Kool’ as I use it very often when talking with my peers and family
What is your favorite book?
20 shades of gray
What is your guiltiest pleasure?
binge eating on Belgium chocolate , that is my biggest weakness
To whom would you most like to say sorry and why?
To my long lost brother in which I have no contact with, as I left him in our care home when we were younger
What or who is the greatest love of your life?
Kate smith whom I am now married too, we were young lovers since school around the age of 16
What does love feel like?
Completeness like that missing puzzle has been complete.
What was the best kiss of your life?
when I was 10 years old and kissed my first ever crush
What is the worst job you've done?
working in a food supermarket as a cashier!
What has been your biggest disappointment?
not getting my promotion at work and loosing it to my arch enemy
If you could edit your past, what would you change?
my family life including sticking around for my brother and bettering my relationship with my parents whom are now not present.
How often do you have sex?
every week , as I have a busy schedule and I’m very tired from the day I spend 1 whole day a week with my wife where we have our private time.
What is the closest you've come to death?
Nearly got run over by a car when saving my long lost brother.
#what do you consider your greatest achievement?
Succeeding &perusing in my career as a stock broker
What keeps you awake at night?
Stresses of work, social &family life
How would you like to be remembered?
As a very successful individual or even a ‘living legend’
What is the most important lesson life has taught you?
To succeed in life you must strive and be motivated
Pockets - Short Film
“Pockets” – Short Film
The set up of the film “Pockets” is about a poor man at the end of his rope, unable to provide or the woman he loves. As a result he decides to rob a stranger in order to get a good meal.
The reason I chose this particular film is because of theunique and clever storyline. I liked the fact that the creator of this film has turned a real life situation such as theft/robbing and has turned it into a unique and ironic situation.
In the opening scene of“Pockets” it opens with an explosive non diagetic sound with the film titles in bold white capital letters appearing. I found this technique interesting because it grips the audience straight away because of the unexpected powerful sound. There is also an off-screen voiceover of the troubled man communicating about his problems suggesting he is directly trying to communicate with the audience. This is a unique technique because it has used a variety of communication skills instead of just the man speaking to himself. A quirky element of the film which I found interesting is the scene where the troubled man is about rob another man who is a complete stranger in order to eat well. The real quirkiness of the scene is that he threatens and also searches him with a sharp knife, so as he invades the victim’s pockets he finds himself mysteriously entering his own pocket which I found very “quirky and anxious. A non diagetic soft tune quickly plays to signify something “out of this world”has occurred.
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